Sunday, December 23, 2012

The Thoughts Of A Bitter,Lonely Woman

Compliments of the season,I trust every one is as fabulous as I am..I was actually just chilling when my imaginations ran wild and gave birth to this poem. I'm not a professional poet infact,I'm not a poet like some people*they know themselves*lol but,I just decided to share my thoughts with you guys..it's not flawless and I hope you guys enjoy it.. So,I present to you my first work.. Happy reading.

In the stillness of the night
I sat with my thoughts
Thoughts about what the future holds in this cruel and cold world
My growing up was filled with so much hopes
But those hopes gave way to bitterness and rejection
I was the daughter of my mother
I was my father's daughter
I was loved
But death stole my most precious treasure
I am a woman
I am a bitter woman
A woman who had nothing to live for
But the most purest thing walked into my life
And I thought I had my miracle
My miracle,was my best friend
My confidant
But nature,was working against me
Now my miracle is gone
Gone with my hopes and my happiness
Now,I'm just a lonely woman
Sitting in this dark room
Alone with my thoughts
And the frogs in the mud just outside my house,are the only thing alive in my world
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23 comments:

  1. @ilolaDecember 23, 2012 at 9:13 PM

    You lost your miracle? What's the miracle? Tryna wrap my head around it.

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    1. Becqui NicholasDecember 23, 2012 at 10:30 PM

      The writer was refering to a man that walked into the life of the bitter woman as a miracle cuz he came,when she felt she had nothing to live for but unfortunately,the happiness she felt wasn't for long... Hope it's clearer now?

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  2. DiDiDecember 24, 2012 at 9:10 AM

    Compliments of the Season.. :)

    Nice..

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  3. ada dencoDecember 24, 2012 at 10:44 AM

    nice one
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  4. A-9ja-GreatDecember 24, 2012 at 1:50 PM

    For your first poem,i'd say i'm very impressed.It feels like something that could've been written by someone who's been writing poems.

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  5. maggiepeggDecember 24, 2012 at 2:56 PM

    Wow that was too brilliant to be your first :) Merry xmas from your new subbie. Loves from Sweden.

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    1. Becqui NicholasDecember 24, 2012 at 3:03 PM

      Awww thanks dear *smiles*...

      Thanks for dropping by dear.. xoxo

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  6. AnonymousDecember 24, 2012 at 7:20 PM

    I like the poem, it make sense to me.

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    1. Becqui NicholasDecember 24, 2012 at 8:49 PM

      Thanks dear,glad you like it..

      Thanks for dropping by.

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  7. DonDecember 24, 2012 at 11:21 PM

    Love the different expressions of emotions taking place in the prose which allowed me to reflect upon certain past instances in my life that brought forth one or two of the same emotions.

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    1. Becqui NicholasDecember 24, 2012 at 11:51 PM

      Thanks dear....I'm glad you like it.. Thanks for visiting.

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  8. ReggieDecember 24, 2012 at 11:38 PM

    Nice post

    ....clearly you have skillz.

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  9. 001December 25, 2012 at 12:05 AM

    cool poem becqui.....esply for first! Compliments of the season dear .

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    1. Becqui NicholasDecember 25, 2012 at 12:10 AM

      Thanks Tamie (((((smiles)))))...... Merry Christmas

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  10. sugarspringDecember 26, 2012 at 5:42 PM

    beautiful for a first timer..
    keep it up
    and compliments of the season lovey

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    1. Becqui NicholasDecember 26, 2012 at 7:12 PM

      Thanks dear,and I sure will keep it up..

      Compliments of the season..xoxo

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  11. dayorDecember 26, 2012 at 6:58 PM

    Nice one!
    All you poets, please write me a Christmas poem na. lols

    Merry Christmas to you.

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    1. Becqui NicholasDecember 26, 2012 at 7:14 PM

      Lols definitely,a Christmas poem will come your way..

      Merry Christmas to you too dear..

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